http://shorttopics.edublogs.org/2009/02/24/spanking-works/ Just another Edublogs.org weblog Tue, 24 Feb 2009 17:39:34 -0500 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://shorttopics.edublogs.org/2009/02/24/spanking-works/comment-page-1/#comment-10 lhuff Tue, 24 Feb 2009 17:35:47 +0000 http://shorttopics.edublogs.org/?p=12#comment-10 You've constructed a strong argument here--one that makes sense. While your personal examples are quite effective, the assignment required you to locate two pieces of evidence from sources. You can strengthen your argument by bolstering it with evidence from "experts." You’ve constructed a strong argument here–one that makes sense. While your personal examples are quite effective, the assignment required you to locate two pieces of evidence from sources. You can strengthen your argument by bolstering it with evidence from “experts.”

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